12.27.2009
BR 2-14: The Dream
Biff couldn’t sleep. Dad told her a story. The story was about a dragon. Biff dreamed about the dragon. It was a very nasty dragon. Biff had to fight it. She woke up soon and went downstairs. Next, mom told her a story. The story was about a dolphin. Biff dreamed about a dolphin. Finally she could sleep well.
I experienced like this so, I could sympathize with this story.
Reference
Hunt, Loderick. (1990) The Dream. England: Oxford University.
(94 words)
BR 2-13: Viking adventure
Biff, Chip and Wilf were in Mr. Johnson’s class. Mr. Johnson had a model ship. He showed the children a picture of a Viking ship. They made model long ship and they also made Viking shields and helmets. Suddenly, the magic was working after all. They were on Viking long ship. The wind blew harder and the ship tossed up and down. At last the long ship landed. The children waded to the shore. The Vikings took the children into a long hall. As soon as it was dark a long ship sailed close to the shore. Viking raiders were going to attack the village. They looked very fierce and they ran towards the village. Biff had an idea. She shone her torch. They had never seen a light like this before. So, they were frightened and they all fell to the ground. The villagers gave Biff a shied. Mr. Johnson had never seen like this shied. Biff looked at wilf and smiled.
I thought Biff is a bravery and smart girl. It was funny that Biff used a torch.
Reference
Hunt, Loderick. (1990) Viking adventure. England: Oxford University.
(212 words)
BR 2-12: Floppy the Hero
A fire engine went by. There was a fire so, everyone ran to see. Fireman stopped them because dangerous. A barn was on fire. Then a little dog ran to the barn. She barked and barked. Then Floppy ran to the barn. He jumped in the window. A boy, Chip, warried about Floppy. The firemen pushed the door down. Then Floppy ran out. He had some puppies. Everyone looked at Floppy and said he is a hero.
I thought Floppy is a very good dog. If there was not Floppy around there, puppies were not saved.
Reference
Hunt, Loderick. (1989) Floppy the Hero. England: Oxford University.
(130 words)
BR 2-11: A Day in London
Gran came to stay. The children ran to meet her. Gran had promised to take the children on an outing. When they got to London, Gran parked the car. On top of the cdumn was a statue of Nelson. There were lots of pigeons in Trafalgar Square. They went to Buckingham Palace. The children couldn’t see who was inside the car. Gran took them on a boat. It began to rain and the wind blew. They couldn’t enjoy.
I thought they were unlucky. I felt sorry for them.
Reference
Hunt, Loderick. (1990) A day in London. England: Oxford University.
(116 words)
12.26.2009
BR 2-10: Stories of MONSTER
Ben Boggle lay awake in a cold sweat. How could he sleep with a monster under his bed? At school, Ben could hardly keep his eyes open Ben bought a book of Monsters. As soon as he got home, Ben read the book from cover to cover. But there was no mention of monsters under the bed. Ben decided to build a monster trap. That night, his monster trap had worked. The smallest monster in the world was tangled in the net. She wailed and started to sob. Ben began to feel sorry for the strange little creature. They became a friend each other.
I thought monsters are awful but this monster is very small. I thought this monster is cute.
Reference
Kelly, Alison. (2004) Stories of MONSTER. England: Usborne Publishing.
(153 words)
BR 2-09: The clumsy prince
Colin was the clumsiest prince in the kingdom. One day, he tripped in front of a sad princess. She thought he was so funny, she wanted to marry him on the spot. Her father had other ideas. He gave Colin three tests, tests he knew Colin would not pass. Colin couldn’t pass the tests. That night, Colin couldn’t sleep. Suddenly, he heard a scream. It was the princess. He learned out of his window and sent a flower pot frying…straight onto the head of the man stealing the princess. The princess thief fell to the ground with a thud. Colin raced from the tower and swept up the princess. The king agreed their marriage. So Colin lived clumsy, but happy ever after.
This story was very interesting. He save the princess thanks to he was clumsy.
Reference
Kelly, Alison. (2003) The clumsy prince. England: Usborne Publishing.
(164 words)
BR 2-08: Stories of Gnomes & Goblins
Jessy was skipping in the sun when she heard a tiny, tiny cry. When she was looked down, there was a fairy, stuck in a spider’s web. Jessy could hardly believe her eyes. Gently, she lifted the fairy form the web. She was invited to Goblin Hill. But looked closely, she saw a door. The fairy cast a spell on her. The fairy opened the door and led Jessy inside. Prince Kester was very excited to meet Jessy. He asked the goblin choir to sing a song just for Jessy. Finally, king gave her flowers. Jessy ran down the tunnel and rolled out of the door. Outside, the grass was a jungle. Jessy was still the size of a bee. But, as she stood up, Jessy shot to her usual size. She looked back at the hill. The door was nowhere to be seen.
I think Goblins were very kind because they had never seen like her but they entertained her. I think Goblin Hill like a dream.
Reference
Kelly, Alison. (2003) Stories of Gnomes & Goblin. England: Usborne Publishing.
(197 words)
BR 2-07: The princess and the Pen
Once upon a time there was a prince who wanted to marry a princess. But he didn’t want just any old princess. He wanted a real one. Not one of the local princesses would do. The next day Prince Patrick set out to travel the world, in search of a real princess. He took with his cousin, Fred. They hadn’t gone far when they heard a loud sneeze from under the seat. It was Peg. She wanted an adventure. Prince Patrick found Peg is a real princess.
Peg is just a friend for him. But he found she is a real friend. These points are very interesting.
Reference
Kelly, Alison. (2004) The princess and the Pen. England: Usborne Publishing.
(138 words)
12.16.2009
Essay (2-03b): Learning language stories
I want to travels a lot of countries in the future. English is very useful for them. Many people speak English. If I can speak English, I can talk with many people all over the world. I want to get a job in which I use English. So I have to study English very hard. In particular, I have to study business English I love Thailand so I also want to live Thailand in the future. There are few people who can speak English. So I have to study Thai language to live there. I have a lot of dreams so I must study harder for them come true.
Second, I will write about my past day. I have studying English since I was elementary school student. But when I was elementary school student, I studied only Romaji. When I was junior high school student, I stared to study English words and grammar. I like English so I was good at English. When I was high school student, English classes were very difficult. Honestly, I didn’t like English classes. But I liked to study English so I studied English while I listened to English songs at home. So I bought a lot of English CDs and I memorized the words of them. I often looked up words in a dictionary and I also memorized meaning. I studied English with these ways, when I was high school student.
I stared Thai, when I was high school student. I also bought a lot of Thai singers’ CDs and I listened to them everyday. And I bought text of Thai. I studied grammar and words myself. To study Thai was very interesting for me. So I studied it very hard. Sometimes I went to house of a Thai acquaintance. She taught me Thai. Thanks to them, now I am able to speak, listen, write and listen a little.
When I was freshman, I took two languages classes. These are Spanish and Korean. Spanish was very difficult. But thanks to the Spanish classes, I am remembering Spanish greeting phrases. Korean classes were very interesting. I watched some Korean movies. I was interested in Korea so I liked the Korean classes. The day before exam, I had Korean exchange students teach Korean. Thanks to study these languages, I could talk with a lot of exchange students. These things are very useful for me.
Finally, I will write about what I doing now. I am studying English and Thai now. I study English every day at KGU, but I am not making a progress English. I think I have to study harder English and I also have to talk more with foreigner. I couldn’t go to study to New Zealand this year because of new flu. So if I get a chance to get to study English next year, I want to participate in it.
I think that studying languages is very important. I want to be able to speak English and Thai. I also want to study Korean again. Korea is very close from Japan so I can travel there anytime. I think if I can speak Korean, it will be good for me. I think study these languages not only at university but also at home.
(613 words)
12.01.2009
Essay (2-03a): Learning languages stories
But I can’t speak these languages smoothly. To lean foreign languages is too difficult for me.
First, I will write about my future. I want to travel a lot of countries in the future. English is very useful for it. Many people speak English. If I can speak English, I can talk with many people all over the world. And I want to work to use English. So I have to study English so hard and I also have to study business English. And I love Thailand so I also want to live Thailand in the future. There are few people who can speak English. So I have to Thai to live there. I have a lot of dreams so I study harder to be realized them.
Second, I will write about my past day. I have studying English since I was elementary school student. But when I was elementary school student, I studied only Romaji. When I was junior high school student, I stared to study English words and grammar. I like English so I was good at English. When I was high school student, English classes were very difficult. Honestly, I didn’t like English classes. But I liked to study English so I studied English while I listened to English songs at home. So I bought a lot of English CDs and I memorized the words of them. I often looked up words in a dictionary and I also memorized meaning. I studied English with these ways, when I was high school student. And I stared Thai, when I was high school student. I also bought a lot of Thai singers’ CDs and I listened to them everyday. And I bought text of Thai. I studied grammar and words myself. To study Thai was very interesting for me. So I studied it very hard. Sometimes I went to house of a Thai acquaintance. She taught me Thai. Thanks to them, now I am able to speak, listen, write and listen a little. When I was fresh man, I took two languages classes. These are Spanish and Korean. Spanish was very difficult. But thanks to the Spanish classes, I am remembering Spanish greeting phrases. Korean classes were very interesting. I watched some Korean movies. I was interested in Korea so I liked the Korean classes. The day before exam, I had Korean exchange students teach Korean. Thanks to study these languages, I could talk with a lot of exchange students. These things are very useful for me.
Finally, I will write about now. I am studying English and Thai now. I study English every day in KGU but I am not making progress English. I think I have to study harder English. I couldn’t go to study to New Zealand this year. So if I get a chance to get to study English next year, I want to participation it.
I think to study languages is very important. I want to be able to speak English and Thai. I also want to study Korean again. Korea is very close from Japan so I can travel there anytime. I think if I can speak Korean, it will be good for me. I think study these languages not only at university but also at home.
(593 words)
11.12.2009
Speaking survey
Yes / No
2) Do you come to school by car?
Yes / No
3) Do you have your own car?
Yes / No
4) Do you think you need parking space in KGU?
Yes / No
5) How much would you pay for parking a day?
a) less than 400yen
b) more than 400yen
c) just 400yen
6) How far are you from KGU?
a) less than 30 minutes
b) less than 1 hour
c) more than 1 hour
Do you want to go to school by car?
Yes / No
How do you come to school?
a) bicycle or walk
b) bus
c) train
d) bike
How far are you from KGU?
a) less than 30 minutes
b) less than 1 hour
c) more than 1 hour
What is bad point of travelling this way?
a) takes a lot of time
b) get tired
c) other
(155 words)
11.11.2009
Essay (2-2b): Baseball & travel English websites
This baseball web site is short sentences and not difficult so, it is easy to understand. There are many information about twelve teams in this site. Recently, Jyojima decided to play baseball in Japan. He had played baseball in Japan before, but he went to Major League and he joined Mariners. He is a catcher and he played with Ichiro. Jyojima was selected WBC by Hara manager of the Giants. He is a great player. He had belonged to the Softbank Hawks but this time he decided to join the Hanshin Tigers. I am looking forward to watch him play next year. Draft commission held in Japan yesterday. Yusei Kikuchi was selected by six teams. The result was that Saitama Seibu Lions got a right of his negotiation. I want to watch his pitching soon.
I will write about Mariners. There are some pictures and videos in this site so, it is interesting. Speaking of Mariners, I like Ichiro very much. He is a so famous baseball player. He chose WBC, too. If he joined WBC member, Japan didn’t won the world championship. Ichiro records his 200th hit for the nine straight season. It is terrific record. He does same things every day but he evolves day by day. When he played baseball in Japan, he belonged to Orix Buffaloes. He is the pride of Japan. I am sure he will make new record in the future.
I like to see travel web sites because I can know a lot of information of many countries. This time, I chose web site which a tour to Bangkok, Thailand. This web site’s sentences are not too long so, it is easy to understand. I have never been to Thailand, but this site writes many things. If I don’t know where there are tourist spots, I see this site and I can find it. I like shopping so if I go to Thailand, I want to go shopping. This site gives me information of many shopping places. For example, Siam paragon, Central World, Weekend Market and other destinations. And this site also put restaurant information with pictures. When I see it, I really want to go there. The others, there are many pictures in the site. It makes me feel fun. I liked Bangkok more and more.
I searched English web site in the class, I want to see more English web site. I want to try to see English site not only Japanese site.
JapanBall. com
http://www.japanball.com/news.phtml?id=15843
MARINERS BASEBALL
http://seattle.mariners.mlb.com/mlb/events/ichiro200/
Bangkok. com
http://www.bangkok.com/tourism-first-time-visitors/index.html
(453 words)
11.09.2009
Speaking class
Yes / No
2) Do you come to school by car?
Yes / No
3) Do you have an own parking area?
Yes / No
4) Do you think you need parking area in KGU?
Yes / No
5) How much cost of parking?
a) less than 400 yen
b) more than 400 yen
c) just 400 yen
6) How far is it from KGU?
a) less than 30 minutes
b) less than 1 hour
c) more than 1 hour
Do you want to go to school by car?
Yes / No
How do you come to school?
a) bicycle or walk
b) bus
c) train
d) bike
How far is it from KGU?
a) less than 30 minutes
b) less than 1 hour
c) more than 1 hour
What is bad point your way?
a) take many times
b) tired
c) other
(150 words)
10.30.2009
Essay (2-2a): English website
First, I chose Japanese professional baseball web site. There are many information about twelve teams. Recently, Jyojima decided to play baseball in Japan. He had played baseball in Japan before, but he went to Major League and he joined Mariners. He is a catcher and he played with Ichiro. Jyojima was selected WBC by Hara manager of the Giants. He is a great player. He had belonged to the Softbank Hawks but this time he decided to join the Hanshin Tigers. I am looking forward to watch him play next year. Draft commission held in Japan yesterday. Yusei Kikuchi was selected by six teams. The result was that Saitama Seibu Lions got a right of his negotiation. I want to watch his pitching soon.
Next, I chose Mariners web site. I will write about Mariners. Speaking of Mariners, I like Ichiro very much. He is a so famous baseball player. He chose WBC, too. If he joined WBC member, Japan didn’t won the world championship. Ichiro records his 200th hit for the nine straight season. It is terrific record. He does same things every day but he evolves day by day. When he played baseball in Japan, he belonged to Orix Buffaloes. He is the pride of Japan. I am sure he will make new record in the future.
Finally, I chose travel web site. I like to watch it because I can know a lot of information of many countries. This time, I chose web site of Bangkok, Thailand. I have never been to Thailand, but this site writes many things. If I don’t know where there are tourist spots, I see this site and I can find it. I like shopping so if I go to Thailand, I want to go shopping. This site gives me information of many shopping places. For example, Siam paragon, Central World, Weekend Market and so on. And this site also put restaurant information with pictures. When I see it, I really want to go there. The others, there are many pictures in the site. It makes me feel fun. I liked Bangkok more and more.
I searched English web site in the class, I want to see more English web site. It is good to study English. I want to try to see English site not only Japanese site.
(408 words)
10.28.2009
English web sites
http://www.japanball.com/news.phtml?id=15843
This web site is written about Japanese baseball. There are many information about it.
MARINERS BASEBALL
http://seattle.mariners.mlb.com/mlb/events/ichiro200/
This web site is Mariners'. Ichiro is on this site.
Bangkok. com
http://www.bangkok.com/tourism-first-time-visitors/index.html
I can know a lot about shops, hotels, tourist spots and so on of Bangkok.
( 48words)
10.21.2009
Speaking class
Next, I interviewed Hanako about jobs. Her father is an elementary school teacher and her mother is a dietician. But she wants to be a English teacher in the future. She wants to try a flight attendant once and she wants never try a fireman. If money were no problem, she wants to be a carpenter. If she could do any job, she wants to be a university professor.
To interview my friends about jobs is interesting!
(174 words)
Essay (2-01b): ☆☆☆My Fairyland☆☆☆
First I will write about my room. When I am in home, I am usually in my room. I like my room very much. I like Asia so; there are many cute Asian miscellaneous goods in my room. And I am collecting Asian accessories. I decorate them on the table. When I see them, I become feel happy. I like good fragrant and I have a lot of incense sticks. For example, coconut flavor, strawberry flavor, green apple flavor, jasmine flavor and so on. My room fragrant with them every day.
Recently, I bought new TV in my room so though I don't go to the living room, whenever I want to watch the TV programs I can do it. I often watch the movies in my room. I like to watch the movies alone. It is makes me calm. My hobby is listening to music so I have many CDs. Most of them are Thai CDs. I always buy them on internet from Thailand. My hobby is collecting Thai CDs. I listen to them when I go to bed. They are such like a nursery song for me.
Next, I will write about library. I like library because it is very quiet. I like quiet places more than noisy places. I can be there for the long time. I don’t have books much so if I go to library, I can read many books. Moreover, to use library is not costly.
Next, I will write about nature. I like to go to places where there are many natures. For example, Aso, Amakusa, Yufuin and so on. I go to these places, I feel refreshed. If I go to mountain, I can find many flowers and trees. There are a lot of plants also I can find a lot of kinds of birds. I like to hear the song of birds. And to see the night sky there, I can beautiful stars and moon. It is great. If I go to sea, I can feel sunshine and I can find many fishes. When I was child I had brought to sea by my grand father. So, sea is a memorial place for me.
Finally, I will write about kitchen. I am not good at cooking but I sometimes try to cook. When I cook dishes, I often garnish fruits. There are always some fruits in my kitchen. I love fruits. Fruits look like cute and fresh color. So I want to put fruits on kitchen.
These are my favorite places. I have a lot of favorite places, but I want to find more good places.
(467 words)
10.20.2009
BR 2-06: The Quest
Long ago, and far away, there was a beautiful land called Ulm. The sound of the bell told every animal, every plant and every tree when it was spring or summer. The evil Grimlock lived in the cold, black mountains of Grim. He wanted the crystal bell of Ulm, and he spent years looking for it. Grimlock took the bell back to the land of Grim. Without the bell, the land of Ulm became dark and grey. All the beauty had gone from the land and the days were cold and long. Biff had to go to dentist. After Biff had gone, suddenly, the magic key began to glow, and Wilma was taken into a magic adventure. The magic took Wilma to the Land of Ulm. The land was cold and bare. Grimlock was hiding behind a tree. He wanted to stop Wilma from going on the quest. Soon the ground became wet and muddy. Her feet sank into the mud. Suddenly a white unicorn helped her. She met a gnome there. The gnome took Wilma up the mountain to Grimlock’s castle. The gnome knew a secret way to get into the castle. At last, they came to the room where the crystal bell was hanging. Then the bell began to ring. At last, Grimlock asked Wilma if she could make the bell stop ringing. Wilma and the gnome took the bell back to Ulm and the quest was over. When the bell returned, beauty came back to the land of Ulm again. The magic began to glow. Wilma finished her story.
This story was very interesting. I became to want the bell.
Reference
Hunt, Roderick. (1993). The Quest. England: Oxford University.
(290 words)
10.19.2009
BR 2-05: Kipper and the Giant
Kipper was watching a programme called “The Angry Giant” The angry giant lived in a castle near a village. Nobody in the village liked the giant. He was always cross. When the giant was cross he stamped his feet and the house shook. Kipper went to find Chip but he was out. He picked up the magic key and it began to glow. It took Kipper inside the magic house. The magic took Kipper to the gate of the giant’s castle. He didn’t want to meet the giant, so he went to the village. Kipper came to the village but it was a tiny. Kipper was a giant. The people threw things at Kipper. Kipper began to cry. The people thought he can help us. Kipper helped the villagers to mend their houses. He put back the broken roofs. He picked up the stone and took it outside the village. All the people liked Kipper. The village band played for him. The giant came back. He was very angry when he saw Kipper in the village. He ran towards the village. Crash! He fell over the stone. The people were frightened but Kipper went to help the giant. Kipper was bigger then the giant. Kipper said “Stop being angry and the people will like you.” So the giant stopped being angry. The people liked him. The key began to glow. The magic took Kipper home. “Nobody likes an angry giant,” said Kipper.
I think Kipper is a good boy. If he didn’t go village, nobody likes him yet.
Reference
Hunt, Roderick. (1987) Kipper and the Giant. England: Oxford University.
(264 words)
BR 2-04: Victrian Adventure
Biff and Chip had been to London with Gran. The magic took them back in time to a street on a foggy day. The children were in London. A girl was standing under a gas lump. Her name was Vicky. They followed Vicky down winding streets. At last, they came to a blacksmith’s. The blacksmith was looking at a horse’s hoof. The children pumped and pumped until the fire glowed hot. It was hard work. The children were hungry. Vicky took them to a street with a high wall. The children jumped off the wall and ran to the palace. Someone opened a window and they all ran towards it. There were three children inside. They were the grandchildren of Queen Victoria. At that moment, a grown-up came in and saw them. The royal grandchildren were sent to bed. The others were taken to a police station. The next day, an important man came to see the children. The important man took them to Buckingham Palace. Gran was having tea with Queen Victoria. The children played in the throne room. The magic key began to glow. It was time for the adventure to end.
I think the children met good people and hey had a good time there. I wonder when children and Gran were took London, why they separate.
Reference
Hunt, Roderick.(1990) Victorian Adventure. England: Oxford University.
(224 words)
10.18.2009
ชิน - ชินวุฒอินทรคูสิน
Flavor
←I like these incense sticks very much. I especially like jasmine flavor. You should buy it at least once!
First, I recommend you eucalyptus flavor. This oils effects are be refreshed, recover fatigue, up your concentration and good for stuffy nose and cough. I use this oil when I feel bad. This flavor is cool and I like it. My mother like it, too so she finished use it, she buy it soon.
Good flavor makes me calm. So against my better judgment, I buy good flavor things on impulse.
(154 words)
10.17.2009
Draft essay: ☆☆☆My fairyland☆☆☆(Revision)
First, I will write about my room. When I am in home, I am usually in my room. I like my room very much. I like Asia so; there are many cute Asian miscellaneous goods in my room. And I am collecting Asian accessories. I decorate them on the table. When I see them, I become feel happy. I like good fragrant and I have a lot of incense sticks. For example, coconut flavor, strawberry flavor, green apple flavor, jasmine flavor and so on. I can fragrant with them in my room every day. Recently, I bought new TV in my room so though I don't go to the living room, whenever I want to watch the TV programs I can do it. I often watch the movies in my room. I like to watch the movies alone. It is makes me calm. My hobby is listening to music so I have many CDs. Most of them are Thai CDs. I always buy them on internet from Thailand. My hobby is collecting Thai CDs. I listen to them when I go to bed. They are such like a nursery song for me.
Next, I will write about library. I like library because it is very quiet. I like quiet places more than noisy places. I feel tired when I am in noisy places. I can be in library for the long time. I don’t have books much so if I go to library, I can read many books. Moreover, to use library is not costly. When I go to library, I usually read novels. It makes me calm.
Next, I will write about natures. I like to go to places where there are many natures. I go to there, I feel refreshed. If I go to mountain, I can find many flowers and trees. There are a lot of green. And I also can find a lot of kinds of birds. I like to hear the song of birds. And to see the night sky there, I can beautiful stars and moon. It is great. If I go to sea, I can feel sunshine and I can find many fishes. When I was child I had brought to sea by my grand father. So, sea is a memorial place for me.
Finally, I will write about kitchen. I am not good at cooking but I sometimes try to cook. When I cook dishes, I often garnish fruits. There are always some fruits in my kitchen. I love fruits. Fruits look like cute and fresh color. Moreover, fruits are very food flavor. If there are fruits in kitchen, I can smell sweet flavor. So I want to put fruits on kitchen.
These are my favorite places. I have a lot of favorite places. But I want to find more good places.
(495 words)
Watching the CS games
I am watching the Central League game now. The game is the Chunichi Dragons vs. the Tokyo Yakult Swallows. Today's starting pitchers are Chen, the Dragons and Ishikawa, the Swallows. First, I liked the Yakult but I like the Dragons recently. The Dragons pitcher, Asao, is very cool and he is very good player. So I want to cheer him. But if the Dragons play with the Giants, needless to say I will cheer the Giants. I think the Giants is the strongest team in other professional baseball teams. I cheer the Giants anytime.
Not to change the subject, the other day I ate Nabe again. Hahaha... The nabe was “motsu nabe” I didn’t ate it much but it was delicious. My families are like nabe so, I think I will ate it many times in this autumn and winter.
(256 words)
10.16.2009
Chocolate
Not to change the subject, I will write about my favorite chocolate! I love chocolate. I love chocolate. I recommend you these chocolate in this picture. I especially like caramel taste one. It was delicious and very soft. If you come across the caramel chocolate, you should buy it!
Next I recommend this chocolate. This chocolate's name is Mellow. This chocolate is not too sweet but delicious and soft. This chocolate is small so, it is easy to eat it. I want to buy many kinds chocolate some day☆
(171 words)
Dinner! Nabe☆
(201 words)
10.14.2009
BR 2-03: Egyptian Adventure
Nadian and Anneena came to play at Biff and Chip’s house. Floppy, ran into the room. Suddenly the magic key began to glow. The key took the children back in time. It took Floppy too. The magic took them back to Ancient Egypt. They were standing by a pyramid. Biff saw Floppy chase the cat. They all went to back to get Floppy, but he was stuck on the blocks of stone. The children looked up at Floppy. Then a man ran over. He looked sat Floppy and gasped. The man called to some people. The people put their hands together and raised them in the air. They sank down on their knees. The people took Floppy away. They people took Floppy to the king’s palace. The people and the children pull one of the big blocks. The Egyptians were carving a giant stone lock. The carving was finished. It isn’t a sphinx at all, it’s Floppy. Some Egyptians carried Floppy. Suddenly the magic key began to grow. Anneena picked up the model sphinx. It looked like a bit like Floppy.
I think this story is very unique. This book was very interesting.
Reference
Hunt, Roderick. (2001). Egyptian Adventure. England: Oxford University.
(197 words)
สยาม, บางกอก in ไทย
I love Mango (มะม่วง)☆ In Thailand, there are mango dessert shop, Mango Tango. If I go to Siam, I really want to go there and I wan to eat mango dessert full. If you want know about Siam, Bangkok, click here! This is Japanese page so, if you can’t understand Thai, that’s all right. You can many Thai shopping centers, restaurants and so on. I’m sure you will like Thailand.
(187 words)
10.13.2009
☆Professional Baseball ai☆
A person is Hiroyuki Nakajima who on a cover. He is the Saitama Seibu Lions player. I like him the best in the team’s players. He took part in WBC this year. He played an active part at WBC. I watched it on TV and I liked him. I often do to watch the professional baseball games but I watched the Lions games every time. I have got the Lions players’ autographs from the Lions batting pitcher. So, I like this team the best in the Pacific League teams. Needless to say, I love the Giants more than other baseball teams. That’s all☆
(216 words)
10.12.2009
Today's my lunch
←These are a fig cake and mambran cake. These look tstes good, don't you?
←These are tiramisu and chocolate cake. This chocolate cake looks very cute! This cake is put macaron on. This cake is my daddy's so, I can't eat...
(193 words)
Takoyaki party☆
BR 2-02: Beyond Strange Street
Sam lay in bed. With a sigh, she got out of bed. Then, very quietly she opened the bedroom door, crept past the living room and let herself out of the flat. The doors were open and she stepped inside. The magic button was there. One push, and she would be in Strange Street again. She looked closer at the button. The letters had changed. They now read W. W. She pressed the button. The doors opened and she got a shock. A sign was nailed to a trunk. It read: “Wild Woods.” She set off along the moonlit path. Once, a rabbit hopped across the path. She wondered if she should go back. And then, sitting on a log by the side of the track, was the strangest little creature she had ever seen. It was obbygobulum. He clapped his paws. There was flash of green light. A nearby tree trunk split open with a crack. Inside was the lift. Sam stepped in. The door closed. She thought “That was the wildest adventure yet.”
When I was reading this book, I was excited. The obbygobulum looks strange but I think he is cute. I want to see dreams such this story.
10.10.2009
#9 Ogata, Hiroshima Carp
Finally, thank you!!! Ogata!!!!!
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Udon
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Yamatonadeshiko
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10.08.2009
Next! Cats medley☆
Please see this!
By the way, I show you my favorite picture. This picture is not Uru’s. But I really like it. This is very cute, isn’t it? I think they are yet baby because they are very small. Their blue eyes are beautiful. I want to try to touch them.
Baby cats are very very cute and so pretty! I love cats!
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Essay (2-01a): ☆☆☆My fairyland☆☆☆
First I will write about my room. When I am in home, I am usually in my room. I like my room very much. I like Asia so; there are many cute Asian miscellaneous goods in my room. And I am collecting Asian accessories. I decorate them on the table. When I see them, I become feel happy. I like good fragrant and I have a lot of incense sticks. For example, coconut flavor, strawberry flavor, green apple flavor, jasmine flavor and so on. My room fragrant with them every day. Recently, I bought new TV in my room so though I don't go to the living room, whenever I want to watch the TV programs I can do it. I often watch the movies in my room. I like to watch the movies alone. It is makes me calm. My hobby is listening to music so I have many CDs. Most of them are Thai CDs. I always buy them on internet from Thailand. My hobby is collecting Thai CDs. I listen to them when I go to bed. They are such like a nursery song for me.
Next, I will write about library. I like library because it is very quiet. I like quiet places more than noisy places. I can be there for the long time. I don’t have books much so if I go to library, I can read many books. Moreover, to use library is not costly.
Next, I will write about natures. I like to go to places where there are many natures. I go to there, I feel refreshed. If I go to mountain, I can find many flowers and trees. There are a lot of green. And I also can find a lot of kinds of birds. I like to hear the song of birds. And to see the night sky there, I can beautiful stars and moon. It is great. If I go to sea, I can feel sunshine and I can find many fishes. When I was child I had brought to sea by my grand father. So, sea is a memorial place for me.
Finally, I will write about kitchen. I am not good at cooking but I sometimes try to cook. When I cook dishes, I often garnish fruits. There are always some fruits in my kitchen. I love fruits. Fruits look like cute and fresh color. So I want to put fruits on kitchen.
These are my favorite places. I have a lot of favorite places. But I want to find more good places.
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Speaking☆
I want to try an announcer at least once. Because announcers can meat a lot of famous people, for example singers, actors, sports players and so on. So I want to see them at close.
I never want to try a policewoman. Because I think police often must be go to dangerous place and they sometimes are in the face of murder cases. I don’t want to see dead bodies. So I don’t want to be a police.
If many were no problem, I want to be a professional baseball player. Because I like baseball very much. I join the Yomiuri Giants. I play baseball with very famous players. I become a famous and popular player. And I play an active part in Japan and I will be a major leaguer. I join Seattle Mariners and I play baseball with Ichiro.
(201 words)
10.07.2009
Beautiful woman
Draft essay: Outlines
―quiet
―TV
―CDs
―music
―good fragrant
―movies
―accessories
library
―quiet
―books
nature
―flowers
―green
―animal
―sea
―water
―sun
―stars
kitchen
―fruits
Draft essay: brainstorms
greens
books
CDs
music
TV
animal
good fragrant
movies
kitchen
stars
water
accessories
quiet
sea
fruits
sun
BR 2-01: A Rat for Mouse
There is a boy, Mouse. His saw his friend Jojo’s new hamster, Jumbo. And Mouse wanted another pet. The next day, Mr. Macdonald took Mouse to the Pet shop. He thought Mouse would choose another rabbit. But Mouse did not want another rabbit. Mouse saw the rat. He became to want the rat. The shopkeeper said that rats made very good pets and don’t try to handle him until he comes to you, or he might bite you. They chose a cage with a ladder and a wheel. Mouse called his rat Ricky. Every day, when he fed up Ricky, he put his hand inside the cage, and let the rat sniff him but Ricky never bit Mouse. Ricky was not sure about anyone else. He would let people stroke him, but he would never let them pick him up. One day when the friends were watching television, Ricky took Ben’s biscuit. Without thinking, Ben made a grab for him. The rat spun round and sank his teeth into Ben’s finger. But Ben said “Mouse is right. I should not have tried to pick Ricky up. I just forgot.” After that, no one forgot again. Everyone was a bit scared of Mouse’s rat. They thought he was fierce and dangerous. But Mouse adored him.
I think Ricky is very clever and he is cute. And Mouse is very kind person.
Reference
Alexander, Jenny. (2001). A Rat for Mouse. Harlow: Pearson Education.
10.01.2009
GIANTS Monthly
9.30.2009
Speaking class
I like wine better than beer. Because beer's taste is bitter. So, I don't like beer much.
2. Which would be more fun to play? A piano / A guitar
I think to play a guitar is fun more than to play a piano. Because when I play a piano before, I couldn't play it at all. Moreover, I like guitar's sound more than piano's. I want to try playing a guitar someday.
3. Which is a better place to shop? YouMe Town / Downtown
I like Downtown better than YouMe Town. Because I think there are manny shops in downtown. I want to go to many shops when I go to shopping.
4. Who would be a better juku teacher? Cameron Diaz / Drew Barrymore
I think Cameron Diaz better than Drew Barrymore. Because I don't know Dre Barrymore. Cameron Diaz is very beautiful woman so I admire her.
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Thank you!!!
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About my imaginary identity
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5 best suggestion
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9.26.2009
9/5 Fukuoka
Then we went to Canal City. We had walked for a long time so we were very tired. But I had a very good time. Thanks everyone.
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V3!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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8.31.2009
20th Fukuoka Yahoo! dorm
This player is Honda. He called "Ponchan" by his fan. I like him the best in the Softbank Hawks. His position is second and he is first batter. When we back to a bus, we saw him by chance! He waved his hand for us as he drove his car. I was very very happy!!!!!!☆ I became to like him more.
Next, this player is Kokubo. He hit a homer on the day. He was the Giants player before. So I know him well. He stood at next batter's circle in this picture. Our seats were back of catcher, so we could see players who stood at next batter's circle. I thought our seats were very good position. These seats were got by my friend. I really thank her.
Finally, this picture is herointerview. Kokubo and Tanoue hit a homer. So they were hero on the day. We saw fireworks after that. It was very close! So sounds were very loud but they were very beautiful. I was impressed by the fireworks.
I like the Giants the best in all professional baseball teams. But I also like to watch the baseball games. I want to go to watch the baseball game again.
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Traffic of New Zealand
I examined about traffic of New Zealand. When I was talked with exchange students, I found the different of traffic between in Japan and in other countries. I have been interested in traffic of New Zealand since then. I especially examined how to get a driver’s license in New Zealand.
2. In Kumamoto
At first people who are older than 18 years old must go to the driving school to get a driver’s license. People must take a lot of lessons and they also must take classes of actual technique at on the grounds and on the street. People acquire a temporary driver's license, and to be able to acquire a driver's license formally after having passed examinations. In this way it is generally two phases in Japan.
3. In NZ
On the other hand, more than 15 years old people can get a driver’s license in New Zealand. But there are three phases not two phases, called Learner License, Restricted License and Full License in New Zealand. People can acquire Learner License by passing a written examination and an eye test. However, a director maintaining Full License more than two years must ride with the seat next to the driver when it runs. When people acquire Learner License, and six months pass, they can apply for Restricted License. As for the people, its acquisition is enabled by passing an eye test and a practical examination, but the examinee must prepare an appointed car by oneself. And when the people who acquired this Restricted License runs in time from 22:00 to 5:00 a.m., that a director takes the seat next to the driver is decided, and people who have Restricted License must not to pick up the person except the companion child of a spouse and a child and the spouse when a director is not. And finally, if there are people who older than 25 years old in the holder of Restricted License, musts have passed six months. If people younger than 24 years old, they must have passed eighteen months. After that, people can apply Full License. The examination contents are an eye test and practical examinations. And you must prepare a designated car by oneself then. By the way, it is ten years on expiration date of Full License. Associate it in this, as for the international driving permit, they can drive a vehicle mentioned in a driver's license for longest one year in New Zealand if they maintain the international driving permit which people acquired in Japan.
The New Zealand traffic rules are keeping to the left as well as Japan. However, it is usually Japan to be different from Japan and the car which makes a left turn than the car turning right is given priority, but must always give priority to an approach or cars turning right from the right side in New Zealand. And people must always put on helmets when they drive a motorcycle and a bicycle.
4. Conclusion
I examine a thing about the New Zealand traffic this time, and there are many points unlike Japan than I expected it and they were surprised me. I want to observe a, besides, Japanese mark and a New Zealand mark with care what kind of point the driver runs it carefully at if I go to the New Zealand, and there is an opportunity in a car.
5. Bibliography
Retrieved from the World Wide Web:
http://nzdaisuki.com/living/enjoy/vehicle.html
(575 words)
7.29.2009
Portfolio for Writing III
Student ID: 08115
Portfolio for Writing III, Section 1A OR 1C
(See: Note 1, below)
0.0. Overview
Reviews, Posts, Words, and More
(See: Note 2, below.)
1.0. Essays
(See: Note 3, below.)
Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).
1.1. Showcase | Short titles with links to blog posts | Dates | ¶ | W | C | L | P | M |
1-01a (2009.04.08) | Letter to a host family | 2009.04.08 | 269 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 | |
1-01b (2009.04.20) | Letter to a host family | 2009.04.19 | 372 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 | |
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1-02a (2009.06.01) | Essay | 2009.05.31 | 300 | 3 | 0 | 0 | 0 | |
1-02b (2009.07.06) | University life | 2009.07.06 | 341 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 | |
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1-03a (2009.06.29) | Lilo&Stitch | 2009.06.29 | 244 | 1 | 0 | 0 | 0 | |
1-03b (2009.07.13) | Lilo & Stitch | 2009.07.12 | 369 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 | |
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Key:
¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length
W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included in post
1.2. Best Essay
Selection and Assessment: Which of those six assigned essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
- I think Essay 1-01b: Letter to a host family is best essay. Because I wrote many words in all essays.
2.0. Comments
Showcase | Titles of posts with links | Dates of comments yyyy.mm.dd | Numbers of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog* | ||||
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog* | ---☆★University Life Essays★☆--- | 2009.05.27 | 15 | I wrote about her hometown. |
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog* | Essay |
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2.4. Most comments on: | Titles of posts with link | Dates of posts yyyy.mm.dd | Total number of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
2.4.1. Any one of your essays* | Essay | 2009.05.31 |
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2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- |
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2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- |
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2.4.2. Any of your other posts* | Yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | 2009.04.31 | --- | --- |
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- |
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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes them good comments.
2.5. Recent comments display
Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.
Recent comment are the sidebar.
2.6. Additional reflections on comments
- I had to write more words.
- I had to tell more questions.
3.0. Book Reviews
3.1. Showcase | Short titles | Dates: yyyy.mm.dd | Words | Comments |
Example: | 2007.05.16 | 39 | 1 | |
BR 1-01 | Harry HELPS OUT | 2009.04.17 | 251 | 0 |
BR 1-02 | A SNAKE MISTAKE | 2009.04.22 | 143 | 0 |
BR 1-03 | Nicky Upstairs and Down | 2009.04.24 | 192 | 1 |
BR 1-04 | Biscuit Finds a Friend | 2009.04.28 | 90 | 0 |
BR 1-05 | The Flying Elephant | 2009.05.09 | 162 | 0 |
BR 1-06 | A Dog Named SAM | 2009.05.27 | 508 | 0 |
BR 1-07 | B is for Books | 2009.06.11 | 76 | 0 |
BR 1-08 | Scat, Cats | 2009.06.17 | 97 | 0 |
BR 1-09 | TINY'S BATH | 2009.06.18 | 75 | 0 |
BR 1-10 | Turtle and Snake's Spooky Halloween | 2009.06.20 | 71 | 0 |
BR 1-11 | TINY GOES TO THE LIBRARY | 2009.06.22 | 85 | 0 |
BR 1-12 | Harry goes To Day Camp | 2009.06.25 | 68 | 0 |
--- | --- | Totals: | 1818 | 2 |
Note: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).
3.2. Best Book Review
Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
・ I think BR 1-04: Biscuit Finds a Friend is my best book review. Because I think I could write content well.
4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media
Showcase | Yes | No |
4.1. Does your blog display an archive? | ○ | |
4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts? | ○ | |
4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month? | ○ | |
4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar? | ○ | |
4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar? | ○ | |
5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately): | --- | --- |
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4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels? | ○ | |
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4.3. Links & media | --- | --- |
4.3.1. Does your blog include photos or other graphics? | ○ | |
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4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links? | ○ | |
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4.3.3. Does your blog include other media? | ○ | |
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4.4. Overall presentation
What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.
I wrote many words than before.
I post many pictures.
I decorated on sentnse.
5.0. Additional reflections on your blog and your writing for it
Please feel free to include reflections on both class work and homework, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, and reflections).
It is very difficult for me to write essays.
Weekly typing test was usefull for me.
To use the portfolio is difficult but very easy to see.
6.0. Advice and suggestions for yourself, your peers, and your successors
I must write longer sentense.
I must include some links and informations.
I must try post blog everyday.
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Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 1st (spring) semester PPF first.
The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derived from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).
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