Draft essay: ☆☆☆My fairyland☆☆☆(Revision)

I have a lot of my favorite places. Today, I will introduce part of them. My favorite places are my room, library, nature and kitchen.


First, I will write about my room. When I am in home, I am usually in my room. I like my room very much. I like Asia so; there are many cute Asian miscellaneous goods in my room. And I am collecting Asian accessories. I decorate them on the table. When I see them, I become feel happy. I like good fragrant and I have a lot of incense sticks. For example, coconut flavor, strawberry flavor, green apple flavor, jasmine flavor and so on. I can fragrant with them in my room every day. Recently, I bought new TV in my room so though I don't go to the living room, whenever I want to watch the TV programs I can do it. I often watch the movies in my room. I like to watch the movies alone. It is makes me calm. My hobby is listening to music so I have many CDs. Most of them are Thai CDs. I always buy them on internet from Thailand. My hobby is collecting Thai CDs. I listen to them when I go to bed. They are such like a nursery song for me.


Next, I will write about library. I like library because it is very quiet. I like quiet places more than noisy places. I feel tired when I am in noisy places. I can be in library for the long time. I don’t have books much so if I go to library, I can read many books. Moreover, to use library is not costly. When I go to library, I usually read novels. It makes me calm.


Next, I will write about natures. I like to go to places where there are many natures. I go to there, I feel refreshed. If I go to mountain, I can find many flowers and trees. There are a lot of green. And I also can find a lot of kinds of birds. I like to hear the song of birds. And to see the night sky there, I can beautiful stars and moon. It is great. If I go to sea, I can feel sunshine and I can find many fishes. When I was child I had brought to sea by my grand father. So, sea is a memorial place for me.


Finally, I will write about kitchen. I am not good at cooking but I sometimes try to cook. When I cook dishes, I often garnish fruits. There are always some fruits in my kitchen. I love fruits. Fruits look like cute and fresh color. Moreover, fruits are very food flavor. If there are fruits in kitchen, I can smell sweet flavor. So I want to put fruits on kitchen.


These are my favorite places. I have a lot of favorite places. But I want to find more good places.
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